Hi Jayden, My name is Zahra and I am from Panmure Bridge School. I have read your DLO about Lake Daniells tramp. It was very interesting and you have this includes lots of information about your day. The dangers are very interesting and I never knew that a boy got lost while he went behind the hut at Lake Daniell. Maybe next time you could a blurb explaining what you had to do while making this DLO. - Zahra
Hi Jayden,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zahra and I am from Panmure Bridge School. I have read your DLO about Lake Daniells tramp. It was very interesting and you have this includes lots of information about your day. The dangers are very interesting and I never knew that a boy got lost while he went behind the hut at Lake Daniell. Maybe next time you could a blurb explaining what you had to do while making this DLO.
- Zahra
Thank You for your comment and next time I will try to make it better,
Delete-Jayden