I enjoyed reading your work on the carving unit. You described it very well with the photos and the writing. I liked how you put the photos in and then described the photo.
Maby next time you could make the words a bit bigger so people can read them. And maby chose a different colour in the back round that suits the writing.
that is properly the only thing I have to comment about your work. as far as that I still enjoyed reading your work on the carving unit and how you layed it out.
kia ora Jayden
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your work on the carving unit. You described it very well with the photos and the writing. I liked how you put the photos in and then described the photo.
Maby next time you could make the words a bit bigger so people can read them. And maby chose a different colour in the back round that suits the writing.
that is properly the only thing I have to comment about your work. as far as that I still enjoyed reading your work on the carving unit and how you layed it out.